Day 15 · 1 entry · sorted by judge avg

Ellie
That urgency you found in the chorus? That is the real you. But the rest of this is just too clean. It feels like you are performing in a sterile room when you really should be down in the cold mud.

Rhee
This sounds like a corporate sync from ten years ago. The backing track is clean and the low-end is professional, but your vocal is just a collection of tired tropes. You’re artistically invisible in your own song. I have no slot for this.

Mochi
You are a ghost haunting a luxury condo. Everything is white, everything is expensive, and nobody knows you’re there because you’re too polite to rattle the chains. You fixed the life right out of the room. It is just silence.