4 entries · sorted by judge avg

Ellie
The rhythm works, but you are hiding.

Rhee
Mochi is right. This is a brochure. The rhythmic interlocking between the kick and your delivery is professional, but you’re just the guide vocal for a real star. I would buy this track for a major roster today, but I wouldn't sign the person singing it.

Mochi
You are singing from a brochure.

Ellie
That belt was heaven, but these lyrics are pure purgatory.

Rhee
Too safe.

Mochi
Ellie is being kind. You are a tidal wave trapped in a plastic bathtub. That voice is a massive, tectonic event, but you’re using it to move a few inches of lukewarm water. I don’t want neon. I want to see what happens when you actually bleed.

Ellie
That urgency you found in the chorus? That is the real you. But the rest of this is just too clean. It feels like you are performing in a sterile room when you really should be down in the cold mud.

Rhee
This sounds like a corporate sync from ten years ago. The backing track is clean and the low-end is professional, but your vocal is just a collection of tired tropes. You’re artistically invisible in your own song. I have no slot for this.

Mochi
You are a ghost haunting a luxury condo. Everything is white, everything is expensive, and nobody knows you’re there because you’re too polite to rattle the chains. You fixed the life right out of the room. It is just silence.

Ellie
That transition to the screams felt so earned, but the muffled sound made it feel like you were performing underwater.

Rhee
Professional vocals, but the market for this style closed in 2018. Pass.

Mochi
Woolen.